THROWING THE FLEECE by VAL POHIO
GRADE - MERIT
This moment has some very nice qualities. The expressions on the two faces focussed on the fleece, and the quality which allows them to be so clearly seen. This is very much a PJ image, and so it's inappropriate that I suggest any changes of a pictorial nature such as removing the toilet sign. However, it is about the fleece, and the figure in the background looking out could be cropped off and the overhead light could be dimmed, but not to the extent of the other two.