GRADE - NOT ACCEPTED
Good imagination, and the comparison is readily recognised. The two outer ones are really too close to the margin for comfortable viewing. I think this is a very good idea, having them floating in the darkness as you do, but suggest that they be taken from an angle so that they are different sizes and effectively closer together, or to simply rearrange and resize them in photoshop. It is a good idea with a dark projected image like this to have a narrow white border, and to show that that the format you have chosen suits the shape of the arrangement, as it does.
From OCTOBER SET SUBJECT "BLACK & WHITE"