SUNKEN TREASURE by GILL KINGSTON
GRADE : ACCEPTANCE
The red rusty colour is a real attention grabber, especially set against the green. Because the vehicle is so large, we found our eyes wandered around, and around the vehicle again, trying to find somewhere to settle. You could try allowing us a little more space around the vehicle or focus in closely on an interesting part such as the headlamp and vines on the left. Photographing when the sun is strong results in dark shadows and in this image, an over exposed patch of sky. Try moving a little to the left to hide some of the shadows and hopefully put the vehicle against some green trees cutting out all the sky.