SPRING LILIES by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE I look at this image and think turbulence and wind. The author has used an artistic approach to photograph the subject. I think the first frame works well with the lilies leaning into the image, the middle frame I feel is just a little too busy, the third frame I would have liked to have seen the stalks of the lilies to echo the other two frames and unfortunately some of the lilies are leaning out of the image and are very close to the edge. I think the author has had a good attempt but I feel it is not a strong image.

BREAKFAST PREP AT MONASTERY by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT The composition of the image is very effective in telling the story of preparing breakfast. Good black & white image with no distractions. The young boy in the background is pin sharp. The author has captured a good atmosphere in the image with all the smoke and steam. There is some loss of detail on the left of the image that could be brought back in post processing. I find the large pot in the front of the image too large and dominating. I think if the author had stepped back a few paces and taken the image it would be a much stronger image.

RED RAG TO A BULL by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT Now I have got rid of the one on my back, let me dispatch the red rag! Great action, multiple stories in progression – man falling, what is the bull going to do next (no prizes for guessing) and then the look on the faces of the men in the background. I love the layering and how each layer reinforces that the end of this story is not going to be good for some. I do not like this activity so my sympathies are with the bull and I am egging him on! The image is well composed, I might advocate for more space on LHS so bull can kick out. Timing is all important with these images. I am interested in how the man can be falling but the bull looks almost static but I assume his flick is complete and he is moving onto phase 2 – dispatch the red rag. Interesting image!

DRAGONFLY PLAYTIME by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT Playtime indeed! This is a stunning image of these insects. We see real action, colours are vibrant, detail is beautifully sharp. Lighting is fabulous and your exposure is almost spot on – slight blowout of the highlight on the insect on LHS. Very well done.

YAMA YANTRA JANTAR MANTAR PARK DELHI by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT Beautiful Black and white image! I love the textures, shapes and lines. I feel the image is a bit too busy. I think you could have 3 images instead of one. Perhaps triptic is a way to go. I would use left hand side panel and rotate it 90 deg clockwise. I love the depth created by leading lines together with tonal contrast.

FISHING ON MANDALAY LAKE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT I like the effect and the black and white treatment. I feel the composition will be more dynamic if the bout will have more oblique position (see attached) This looks more dramatic.

THALASSARCHE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT What a magnificent bird the Bullers Albatross is. This is well focused in flight showing me the detail of its markings and colours especially under its wings. You have positioned this well with the mollymawk flying from the left into the frame. A good effort.

MISTY MORNING ON OKARITO LAGOON by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE This is certainly a misty morning giving it a moody affect. The various green colours and reflections are pleasant to see and give serenity to this image. If there was a focal point of interest eg a white heron it would have scored higher.

PEEK-A-BOO by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS A well executed double expose that superimposes the face on the hands. The eyes are dominent and holds the viewers attention.

DOUBLE TAKE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS Good use of a double exposure technic to create a dream like portrait of a young girl. The viewer is drawn to the eyes and the soft lighting give a gentle feeling to the image. Presenting the image in Black & White is a good choice.

TIMELESS LOVE by Rowena Richards

GRADE - NOT ACCEPTED Obviously, a lot of thought has gone into this image, but I’m not convinced that I’m looking at shadows (other than that any photograph is, in some way a shadow). I’m going to “kick for touch” and not make an award, so that you can use it in a different class.

DUSTY RIDE IN BAGAN by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS Lovely backlighting gives this a very romantic feel, even though there is no sign of romance. A great feeling of warmth and depth.

DARE TO DREAM by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS The tonal range in this image is great and the lighter skin tones of the face draw you straight to her expression. The darker areas around the edges contain the image nicely while the placement of her arm and hand form a strong triangular composition that allows you to explore the image while always returning to the face.

PIGEON MANIA by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS What a wonderful subject for use of a slow shutter speed. The effect from a combination of deliberate movement by the photographer and the movement of the birds has created an amazing image full of interest. The framing of the shot with the tree is the perfect touch.

MANIOTOTO REFLECTIONS by MANIOTOTO REFLECTIONS

GRADE - MERIT The misty dullness hanging in the hilltops makes me feel the cold, damp conditions which are evident. The image is roughly divided into two parts and one tends to concentrate on the upper half rather than the reflections. By adjusting the composition in post production or moving the camera angle downwards, I feel more emphasis could have been placed on the reflection. Otherwise, a lovely landscape image.

RODEO MADNESS by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS A great action shot. Very photo journalistic. For some reason I feel sorry for the steer. His eye seems to show just how frightened or angry he is. The fast shutter speed has stopped the action and made for a good image. Everyone in the image is looking towards the focal point. And one of the ranch hands appears to be recording his own image on an iPhone. Composition is excellent.

YANGON LOCAL by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT To me this tells a straight forward, accurate story of a timeless scene. I like the way you have caught the cigarette smoke and the side light that accentuates the wear on this woman’s face. I find the bright light on the wall draws my eye away from her face and think that the lack of engagement with your subject leads me to feel a bit observational rather than engaged.

NYAUNG SHWE CANAL MYANMAR by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT What a burst of colour here. Is this over saturated? To me your choice of shutter speed has created a feeling of quite frenetic movement amidst a riot of local colour. I feel the crop has left the boat quite constrained in terms of room to move in to. I find your point of focus interesting – and empty. To me it tells a story of the boatman rushing to find a fare.

SHWEDAGON PAGODA YANGON by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE This image is very creative for a Novice worker. I like the concept but unfortunately there is so many components of the image that the intent of it is lost on me. Surely there was enough interest In a single pagoda without the use of the multiple exposures. Keep to the old KISS principle “Keep It Simple Son”

ABANDONED by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT And has been for some time. Great subject. I think though that you could have done more with it. Some creative angle or viewpoint would have lifted it up to the next level. Good colours and sharpness.

DANCING WITH THE DRAGONS by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT What a novel idea. For me the mirror image does not work as both sides are competing for attention. I also find it a bit over processed and would like to see the dust/flour blurred out a bit to give it a bit more movement.

REFLECTIONS by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE The colours and patterns of this subtle abstract are easy on the eye, and pleasant to look at, but after a short while, the novelty wears off for the lack of a strong focal point. This is one with lots of potential – it already has the artistic and creative touch. With a little more thought about the composition, I can see this image reaching new heights.

ALL FOGGED UP by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT A sort of ‘abstract’ appeal about this portrait. The facial features (and especially the eyes), are strongly depicted, and the model’s stark expression with direct eye-contact, adds to the allure of it. Unfortunately, I think the ‘fogging’ of the mouth downwards, makes the lady look like she has a beard, which to a certain extent, takes away some of the effect. However, it is an “intensely” interesting portrait, with strong creative influences.

VIVID FESTIVAL OF LIGHTS by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE This is an interesting wider view with pleasing colour contrast. The inclusion of the spectators suggests this is a special event rather than a daily occurrence. Some cropping off the top and right would improve the composition while a small darkening of the mid tones in the top left quadrant, and of the highlight tones at centre, would remove some of the present looseness.

CLOSE CALL by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE This is an intriguing if rather odd rodeo shot. The dusty background of spectators gives a sense of place which is good. However, the fast shutter speed has rather frozen the dust around the bull which almost looks like a carcass in its strangely prone state. If cropped to include just the cowboy and the front half of the bull, you could entitle it “Stabbed in the Back”!

ONCE PROUD by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT I think this is a great old vehicle for the subject. Another judge might be different but I feel the detail extraction is over-done, I think it has lots its reality and sharpness at the expense of the detail. Or perhaps you could have taken it further and made it solarised or something wacky. It is a good composition and a pleasant image.

VIVID AT SYDNEY OPERA HOUSE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT Isn’t this an amazing festival. It is very difficult to add that extra to this image to make it your own work a supposed to a record shot of what you saw. This is a great family album image – is it an Honours image? No, but I like the star burst and the reflection. If you had taken this just after dusk the sky would have been an indigo instead of black – then maybe an honours

CLOSE CALL by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS Sure is. A great rodeo shot. Great action, and tells a lot about rodeo, without many of the distractions, which often clutter these shots. I love the absolute 'unconcernedness" but passive interest of the viewers in the background. The salivating intent bull, The actions of what I think is the decoy runner, attracting the bull away from a lost rider, is great excitement. It takes a lot of courage, to be placed in that situation, of escaping an intent bull.

OTEMATATA MILKY WAY by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT I think this was a very well chosen subject matter, to contrast against the beauty of 'space' I enjoy particularly the rest for the eyes on the constellation just above centre left which I believe is an area that takes in Antares (the heart of scorpio) and is called Rho Ophiuchi. The eerieness of the old building could be further enhanced by cloning out some of the highlit vegetation at the lower right corner. A lovely image.

HYPOLIMNAS COMMON EGGFLY MATING by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS Well seen and well captured.

ROSE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE An interesting take on a much photographed flower.however I found the white branch to the right competing for attention and making my eye jump around the Image instead of settling on the rose itself.

URBAN ARCHITECTURE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - ACCEPTANCE Personally, I would crop the right side off right to the building as the light sky draws the viewer away from the subject. I would also crop the top off for the same reason. Then I would darken the triangle that is left.

MY SNOW WHITE by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT Great framing here. A few adjustments will help this image achieve more impact I feel. I suggest you always click on the auto button in the develop module/Camera RAW to see what you get then work from there. (Contrast -25-30%, whites +35-40%, blacks -60-65%)

SAND DUNES BLOWING IN THE WIND by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS Lovely repetitive sand pattern image. Nicely exposed in what looks like difficult conditions. Excellent vignetting around the edges which keeps the eye within the picture. Very good contrast. This image is very strong, has impact, and to me, that “wow” factor.

PURAKAUNUI FALLS – CATLINS by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT The intentional or unintentional vignettingin the corners has helped to concentrate interest on these beautiful falls. Consider a crop on the L/H side so that the falls have the appearance of more space to flow into on the R/H side. There is a slight bluish cast on the R/H side of the falls. The long exposure has enhanced the flowing water.

I'M GONNA GET YA by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - NOT ACCEPTED I’m sorry, this image has the name of the author on it. Easy to do, but not good.

CHERRY DELIGHT by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONOURS The photographer has made good use of negative space in this image. There is great contrast between the vivacious and bubbly cherries and the hollow black background. This gives this image its great impact. I love its simplicity and the need, for example, to imagine where the glass is. To my mind the image is little top heavy and would perhaps benefit with just a little less of the black space. But a great feel nevertheless.

CHOMPING AT THE BIT by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - HONORS What a great image. There is no doubt what I am looking at here. The detail and lighting on the horse is lovely. The veins add a textural component to the horse and the light on the whiskers helps them stand out beautifully. Not much more to say … lovely

TUSSOCK DEW by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT To me, this is a lovely closeup macro shot. While there is only the tussock grass to give you a sense of perspective, the size of the dewdrop indicates that you have gone in close to your subject. The leading lines from the diagonal corners of the frame work well to guide my eye towards the main subject matter of the image which is the dew. You have captured some lovely detail of the underneath grass through the dew, and the subject is well separated from the background. Good image.

RAM IN GOOD HANDS by ROWENA RICHARDS

GRADE - MERIT Don't you just love the tongue, but I'm not sure the ram thinks it's in good hands with eyes shut and tongue out. A good tight arrangement which might be improved by a crop closer to the elbow to improve the position of the tongue and remove some of the light area on the other forearm. Half close your eyes and you will see where the hotspots are. A bit soft, but good work.