IS ANYONE HOME? BY YVONNE ASSIE, GRADE MERIT
Another well executed image. The extreme light range has been
well handled, with the race ideally lit, the frame of the window showing some detail,
while the outside has not become overexposed. However, one does get the
impression that the picture was staged - the face does not quite give an impression
of searching. Also, we need one of the black areas to the side of the window
reduced in size (preferably the left?) - once again we have this tendency to put the
centre of interest too central.