SKI HUT by JANELLE REID
GRADE - ACCEPTANCE
I feel this is a factual representation of the hut, possibly taken in high sun. The textures of the iron would love to have a side light on them I feel as would the tussock. I like the inclusion of the outhouse to complete the story of isolation. Take care with where your roof line intersects the hill – a small factor but one which interrupts the triangular background line that grounds the hut I feel. I find the border distracting and the whiteness keeps taking my eye away from your subject.
