I enjoyed the muted colours of the old building. Being brighter in the centre and on the right draws attention to the main subject but including the left hand side allows the viewer to get a sense of place. The blurred figure gives a sense of 'long exposure'. Sadly, for me the bright background beside the figures head detracts from my enjoyment of the photo. Maybe it could be toned down in processing? I also thought the title of 'Sheltered', the probable lack of roof, and the umbrella worked well.
From 2015 SEPTEMBER LONG EXPOSURE