I´D LIKE TO TRY THE BLACK STUFF BUT... by MARKETA STARCHOVA
GRADE : ACCEPTANCE
This is a well seen image and clearly this poor woman has had a hard day at the office! Ask yourself, “what makes this image?” I think your answer will be all about the woman and the fact that she is sleeping whilst she should be serving customers. That being said, I recommend the author to be bold and crop as much as two thirds off the left hand side right up to the black stuff mentioned in the title. This does two things; 1. It losses the very distracting, bright red pants from the background; 2. It brings the story into sharp focus with little or no distracting elements. Do try it and see the difference it will make.