APPROACHING STORM By SARAH SMITH, GRADE MERIT
You have caught some great light and drama in the clouds. The contrasting colour and light on the foreground tussock is also very attractive. We found our eyes going backward and forward between the golds and the blues, a bit unsure where to settle. In this scene it is probably the clouds and the light on the hills which has the strongest interest and to strengthen that further, consider cropping some of the foreground off.